Elljah Katarn - Jedi padawan

[jedielljah]

Name: Elljah Katarn
Age: 17
Species: Human
Homeworld: Sulon
Home: Coruscant
Weapon: Blue Lightsaber
Affiliate: Jedi Padawan
Background info: Great, great grandson of Kyle Katarn, who was a rebel elite agent entrusted with some of the most crucial missions of the Rebel Alliance.
After a troubling run-in with the dark side on the forgotten Sith world of Dromund Kaas, Katarn conceded that he would benefit from Luke Skywalker's tutelage, and joined the Jedi Master's fledgling Jedi academy.

After a spell where all the relatives after his great great grandfather had been rebel elites, Elljah decided he wanted a change and was accepted into the jedi academy at the age of 7.
His mother and father, felt disgraced that their son snubbed an offer of becoming a rebel elite, to become jedi.

His father was killed in a mass battle with the empire on hoth, and his mother cannot be traced.He now lives in coruscant.

He is now a jedi padawan to jedi knight Norkos of Nelvaan.
His preferd style of lightsaber combat is vaapad. He aims to one day become a jedi master and member of the jedi council.


Personality: Wants to be the best, very competitive, quite quiet.
Keeps himself to himself. A bit lonely. He respects his teacher Jedi knight Norkos greatly,

appearance: Brown hair with a flick at the front, clean shaven, Light brown cloak over his cream uniform. About 5ft 11" tall and of medium build.

if i need to add anything just say, new to the site so if im wrong with anything please add
cheers

[zane]

this is set 100 years after return of the jedi. Luke is dead, all cannons are dead.

[jedielljah]

no its his great great grandfather kyle katarn who was recruited by luke.
and on the main page it says one thousand years though?

[Grand Admiral Piscis Vir]

I get the feeling Derja will devour me if I field this one, at least for now. But you probably want to get going.

First off, your age. It is extremely unlikely that a student would be accepted at the age of 13. Exttenuating circumstances (such as Anakin Skywalker) may bend this rule, it does not happen often. Plus, if a youngling isn't taken on as a padawan by 13, he/she is sent to the Jedi Service Corps. Doubt you'd like that much.

Your bio should focus more on you than Kyle. Its fine that you included a bit about your ancestor, but the part on you is a bit skimpy.

Likewise with your personality, expand considerably.

Some final note: if you are a padawan already, you would require a master or knight to teach you. You are free to ask any of the masters or knights. There is a complete list somewhere around here.

[John Tarkin]

Remember Luke changed the rules when he created a new order?

[jedielljah]

should i modify to a knight and bump my age from 17 up a bit? plus expand my background?

[Norkos]

are you sure Jon? I didnt think so.

You can stay as a padawan if you'd like (I'd be happy to train you), but you should wait until we settle this before you go and change your age.

[jedielljah]

Well if you will accept me as your padawan i will change back.
whats your jedi name?

[Norkos]

*Bow*

Norkos of Nelvaan, Guardian Jedi Knight, at your service.

[jedielljah]

*updated*