ysafle
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Post by ysafle on May 8, 2007 22:57:33 GMT
Name: Try Uro Gender: Female Age: 18 Race: Human Home: Coruscant Role in the RP: Sith Apprentice Appearance: Background Info: Try was born on Coruscant to the Senator known as Hyrre Uro. They moved to Naboo shortly after she was born, and Hyrre quickly became King, killing the Queen while she was distracted. He led the planet with a firm hand, and taught Try everything he knew about being a Tyrant, planning to turn her to the Sith so she may return and cause havoc upon the planet. However, she killed her father after finding out his plan, and became Queen. She left Naboo to become a Sith. Her training went on for years, and she finally managed to earn herself a Master. But she had a hate for the man, so she killed him in his sleep aswell. Sith Lords, for some odd reason, now seem not to trust her at the least... Personality: Hates all Jedi and is Mean to those who she describes as 'Unworthy'... Mainly, everyone aswell... Ship: Weapon(s): 1)- Red Lightsaber 2)- Missile Launcher 3)- Dual Blaster Rifles
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Post by Count Qui-Kin Zarum on May 8, 2007 23:14:41 GMT
Maybe you could be like my guard or something since I am Count of Coruscant. Though, your profile could use some work and same with your personality. You age could also be bumped up a few years.
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Post by Shadow Master Derja on May 8, 2007 23:28:12 GMT
Lol, leave that to me Qui, that's staff's job... Please bump your age to maybe 18, and improve your bio, plus your personality is under requirement. (^.^) After these are improved/fixed, you'll be clear.
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Post by Count Qui-Kin Zarum on May 8, 2007 23:37:06 GMT
What the heck? Why are you going around spamming up the boards saying cool pf? nvm about what I said above I wish to have nothing to do with you.
Btw, I was just lending a hand you admin and mods have to many things to do, let alone worry about some spammers profile...
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Post by Grand Admiral Piscis Vir on May 8, 2007 23:41:19 GMT
said spammer is officially not a problem. He has been eradicated as wholly as the bubonic plague.
Yes ysafle, older, and expand your personality and background. Good, other that those things.
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Post by Count Qui-Kin Zarum on May 8, 2007 23:54:56 GMT
Well then, if she is to actually not have bad grammar or spelling and fix up her things on this profile I shall rethink her being a personal guard of mine... =D
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Post by Count Qui-Kin Zarum on May 9, 2007 15:43:51 GMT
Your bio could still use some more work and so can your personality, try to make at least a small paragraph for the personality and two detailed paragraphs for the bio.
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