Geff Calrissan

[Geff]

Name: Geff Calrissan
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Race: Human
Home: Tatooine
Role in the RP: Sith Lord
Appearance: The split image of his ancestor.
Background Info: Geff is from the Calrissan bloodline, the great descendant of Lando Calrissan. Since Lando, though, the Calrissans moved to Korriban, and became affiliated with the most powerful people there. So, Geff is held in very high regard, there, and most citizens see him as almost a ruler.

He was trained in the Sith arts since a boy, and is now the best in the sector. Despite his youth, he is also quite wise, and a skilled pilot.
Personality: Angry
Weapon: Two red lightsabers.

[John Tarkin]

Its good enough to be approved but it could be improved more.

Expand his Personality and its approved.

[John Tarkin]

Sith Lord at 18 no, no, no, no. You would be better off in the Imperail Military. Not approved.

[Shadow Master Derja]

I'm going with Jon on this one, the bio is horrible, personality is too short, your age and rank do not consist with eachother right, and when it comes down to it! There really wasn't any detail, on anything really.

[Grand Admiral Piscis Vir]

I agree with Jon and Derj.

My advice, either increase the age vastly, lower the rank or both.

Also, expand the description (imagine no one here has ever seen Lando Calrissian), biography (talk about his childhood, why he turned to the dark side and all that), and personality (a lot. I mean LOADS!)

[shran]

Hey, who deleted my posts?

At least PM me and tell me why you deleted them or something!

[John Tarkin]

Well its not approved until you edit.

[IT-O9]

and if it's not approved, you will not RP

[Shadow Master Derja]

Geff, you and that other pest Enwa are slowly starting to make me the 'bad' guy of the forum, I'm going to let you know a little something about the forum here, It's protected by me and if you role play without being accepted, or without the temp consent of a staff letting you pass. Well, let's just put it this way, I'm gonna kick you off this site, without even so much as a second thought to it.

[Shadow Master Derja]

Tsyaf, you must be a friend of that loser... Anyway, Geff... BANNED.